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Harare Review of Books's avatar

I hear you about the haircut guy; recently read a story that wasn't quite as bad as that but every description took me out of the narrative, so, ugh.

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James Kinsley's avatar

It's tricky. There's a real art to slipping description in artfully, and it's a skill I do need to work on.

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Emily Male's avatar

Congratulations on completing the first draft James 👏

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James Kinsley's avatar

Thanks Em!

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